ok today in class we first well ill just talk about mr.vegas class ok we came in here and did are oa and we had to talk about what we need in are live that we can not live without so i talked about my mom and how great she is and what she means to me then we started talking aboyt revision how in poems take out all the fat u no nonscence and things like over used words so i voliterd to show my 2 pomes mr.vaga did some resivion on my poem and it was very good he said im going a writing ang things and then we went out side to do another poem and this thing we had to use revison and thatts what we did so now im wirtting so ya bye =)